18 December 2009

Jollie Brook

Strewn out across old river terraces
we walk through tall tussock-grasses
to the beech forest and honey-dew wasps,
and a quick scramble down to the edge of the lake;

then, after lunch and a quick, cold, paddle,
we walk single-file over tree-canopied saddle
to - wouldn’t you know it? -
a creek too wide to jump, just in front of the hut!

With washing hung out on matagouri hooks
and after a good solid meal with my companions,
I put a boot over the mouse-hole in the kitchen
and we each retire for the night.

Come morning, we set off down Jollie Brook,
sometimes on an unmarked route through the water,
sometimes on a sheep track high over a bluff,
back out to tussock-covered river flats and - the van.

Ostensibly,
    a group of friends walking together,
        but each on her own -
            individual -
                journey!


        © Valerie Laura
        18 December 2009

1 comment:

  1. This is, of course, based on the previous entry, "Jollie Brook Hut," published 20 November 2009 - I feel I have more accurately captured the idea I was trying to convey in that poem in this version! However, I will leave "Jollie Brook Hut" here because it was part of my journey towards this one and has its own story to tell.

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